Kea’s Flight: a Book Review

Book cover for Kea's Flight
Kea’s Flight by Erika Hammerschmidt and John C. Ricker
My rating: 3 of 5 stars ★★★

 
Kea’s Flight is a strange hybrid of science fiction, political dystopia, disability rights advocacy and coming-of-age story. It takes place in the future, on a board a spaceship which moves with near-light-speed from Earth to an unknown planet, which the population on board is meant to colonise after the 21 years it takes to get there.

The entire story takes place during the space journey spanning almost 21 years.

 
The Background Story

The purpose of the mission (along with others like it) is to solve a domestic political dilemma faced by Earth’s government. Earth’s ideology and population at the time of departure can best be described as the American Bible Belt gone global.

The dilemma is that the need to prevent overpopulation on Earth and the availability of advanced prenatal screening technology that detects potential disabilities and other genetic problems in embryos and gives the future-parents the choice to bail out of the pregnancy – collides with the popular opinion that abortion is murder.

Therefore, “removal technology” replaces abortion to end unwanted pregnancies, and the removed embryos are cryogenically frozen and stored; their numbers accumulating. Eventually, a series of space colonisation missions are designed as a political solution and PR project to get rid of the frozen embryos in an ethically acceptable way.

However, all that takes place long before the story starts. Time tensions is one of the interesting aspects of the story.

 
On the Spaceship: The Plot

The spaceship the story takes place on, is one of those “garbage ships” with unwanted potential people, sent off from Earth to colonise a supposedly habitable distant planet.

The ship consists of two sections connected by a tube. One section is for its staff (“the BGs”) and the other for its people load (“the Rems”). The Rems are all mentally disabled kids – many thousands of them, greatly outnumbering their guards – with embryo-stage diagnoses like autism, Tourettes and dyslexia. They are all of the same age, since they were all gestated and raised on the spaceship under its strict, robot-enforced big-brother like regime controlled by the BGs. They have obviously never seen Earth.

Without revealing too much, the plot has to do with the fact that just like the ship’s load of disabled kids are people who were not wanted on Earth, its technology is a mix of highly advanced ai systems and crappy old computers, all of which have one thing in common: they were not wanted on Earth for various reasons, like poor quality or dangerous ai features. Even the staff are Earth rejects – selected convicts with relevant experience like child care and computer programming.

In a twist of absurdity, Earth may no longer exist at the time the story takes place. In the 21 years it takes the spaceship to reach the destination planet at near speed-of-light, 1100 years have passed on Earth and on the destination planet. Earth’s government that designed the mission, and which’s propaganda the BGs so zealously enforce, did so in an ancient past and human civilisation on Earth may have collapsed long ago.

The story follows Kea, a girl prenatally diagnosed with autism, as she grows up on the ship and later becomes part of a group of seven friends, all with prenatal mental diagnoses, mostly autism – nerds highly specialised and capable in each their area of interest such as computer programming, physics & astronomy, math, language, and politics.

The composition of the group is obviously a handy set-up for the dramas that unravel as they gradually discover the truths about the mission design and the general condition of the ship’s technology, and the ship’s government in denial. The friends all have each a unique set of abilities and vulnerabilities that makes them relatable, distinct, and highly useful for the plot.

 
My Opinion

I absolutely love the idea, the plot and the setting in space, in time, and in the design of the spaceship itself, as it is rotating around its zero gravity core with hydroponic labs and all its other other cool stuff on board (there is a drawing in the start of the book). And I love the thrill of such a whole alone-in-space-and-time society depending on crappy unpredictable low-budget technology.

 
Photo of book page with simple spaceship blueprint
Spaceship design by Erika Hammerschmidt and John C. Ricker: “Kea’s Flight”

 
I also enjoyed the action parts, all the descriptions of the ship’s interior and its society on board, and the philosophical implications.

What I did not like much was the dialogue and the characters’ tendency to waste time talking about feelings, random thoughts, sex and interpersonal issues even in extremely urgent emergency situations. I felt like shouting SHUT UP AND FOCUS, and found myself skimming pages even in high-suspension action scenes to get on with the plot and past all the talk.

I also wasn’t fond of any of the romances. I do understand how they may be relevant in the story, given that the characters are teenagers coming of age, but at times it was like reading a teenage romance instead of a science fiction story.

Also, I found the book too demonstrative about its disability / autism advocacy agenda, almost propaganda-like, using the characters to provide explanations that would have been better left out, conveyed indirectly, or maybe put in an appendix because it somewhat undermined the authenticity of the characters.

 

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Finally, I was looking forward to see what happened at the destination. There were some (thrilling) complications to that, but the end point of the story was still a planet and I was still waiting for the culmination on the journey. I was therefore disappointed about the story’s ending, which was a happy mix of romance and a promising future, but no planet yet. It is like the ending is missing and after 570 pages, that is frustrating.

In summary, I think the story idea is brilliant and the plot and scenery is fascinating, there are just many sidetracks and the dialogue is very dominating, wordy and conscious – as if the reader can’t be trusted to understand but has to be lead by the hand in the right direction.

I think the story could be an amazing movie in the hands of a great movie director, or a brilliant book in a new, slimmer version with harder editing. The story idea and scenery really has great potential, it just tries to do too much at once.

For more insight, read this interview with Erika Hammerschmidt on The Australian Bookshelf, where Erika talks about what inspired the book.


Kea’s Flight by Erika Hammerschmidt and John C Ricker
Genre: science fiction
Pages: 570
Suitable age range: adults and young adults
Writer’s style: simple. The story is told in first person.
Book’s physical quality: budget paperback
Readability: easy

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